Thursday, 28 January 2021

602: Task 1 Feedback

 Presentation:


Feedback:

  • Pick out the appropriate sections of work to show, don't need to show everything all the time.
  • The foreground/background relationship between the website and work is one that needs to be considered, thinking about how they interact and which shall be more present.
    - This was something I hadn't thought about before, but became really noticeable when looking at other people's presentations too. This is something to bear in mind when working on own website. 
  • Tone of voice when writing, I chose to write in 1st person. This is choice of the practitioner, neither is right or wrong just different.
  • In terms of a name Nick mentioned if might be worth working on one as it can take the pressure off when it comes to branding yourself as well as writing about yourself as a creative. Can be more objective and write truly.
  • Nick mentioned my current 'about' text is good, it demonstrates the tone I was going for. 
    - I want to work on this more to develop an about that strikes the right chord between professional and friendly, feel as though I'll be able to write it better with a little more work.

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