Wednesday, 31 March 2021

602: Not for Anything Just For Fun

I've been seeing a lot of design that I've enjoyed recently, the work isn't necessarily relevant to any projects in 603 but could help me think about new ways of thinking as a designer. I'm wanting to blog about these things I've found to get into habits of collecting information.

SMALL WORLD:

https://www.atlasofplaces.com/photography/small-world/

Small World is a biting satire in which Parr observes global tourism and the search for authentic cultures the tourist’s quest has helped to destroy. It explores the difference between the reality and mythology of a tourist honey pot. The original edition of this book was published by Dewi Lewis in 1995, with a second edition in 2007 containing 70 colour photographs.







I loved the photography in this project, the colour, tone and vibrance makes the images so eye catching. The soft haze you get with film photography adds a softness to the project, it makes the photos appear less harsh and encourages the audience to see the irony and humor in the pictures.
 
Part of the reason why I like this project so much is because I have felt this experience in real life, the content to me is very relatable because I've both participated in and seen the behaviour depicted in these images but it's very entertaining to see a project that embodies this. 
- humourous 
- playful
- bright
- nostalgic
- real

ABC DAYS:


A project inviting twenty-nine international artists to produce one book each to be published between June and July 2020. The result is an archive made by artists - sometimes in quarantine - during a remarkable period encompassing the Covid-19 outbreak and worldwide protests against racism and police brutality.




I love this project, the range within the books is so interesting especially since the format is the same. I think the idea is great, something I'd love to do with my peers. 
It was interesting to see how and if people responded to the happenings that were taking place in the world during this time. 
- collecting
- documenting
- form & function
- what's the purpose
- flat


(B9) Home: Researching & Initial Ideas

Mind mapping themes surrounding Sheffield. I think it would be a good idea to pick a theme to explore and move forward this way (taking photos whenever is best) so that there is a sense of direction, something to communicate effectively to the audience. 


Emerging Ideas:

  • Interconnectivity between people
    - Everyone knows everyone through a couple degrees of separation. Feel this is due to locations and the "village like" nature of the city. 

  • Feeling like a large village or a collection of villages.
    - Something that many people talk about in relation to the city. Feel like this could be due t the small hubs of activity like Sharrowvale, Abbeydale Road, Kelham Island etc.
    - The people are a large part of this, many big characters.

  • Sense of home within the city, something more personal. What is this feeling? What makes the city feel like home?
    - Comfort
    - Familiarity
    - Nostalgia
    These could be themes to think about moving forward with the project. 


ATLAS OF PLACES: a public educational collection of Academia, Architecture, Cartography, Cinema, Essays, Painting, Photography, Research .


Placeways: A Theory of the Human Environment (an essay from the website):

https://www.atlasofplaces.com/essays/placeways-a-theory-of-the-human-environment/

Eugene Victor Walter

Placeways: A Theory of the Human Environment

1988

INTRODUCTION

 

In everyday life, people keep track of places. They talk about how the neighborhood has changed; when that building went up; what it was like in the old days; how it feels to live here now. These comments are spontaneous. They belong to the vital obscurities of life in common – to the lore of places, composed from statement that are always heeded but seldom recorded. The reports continue from one generation to the next, proceeding by observation and reflection, by question and answer, by memory and anecdote.

We recognize different kinds of place change. Cities grow larger or smaller, feel more lively or run down, appear more beautiful or more ugly to the sense. We feel that they get better or worse. We talk about ruin and renewal, urban decay and restoration, decline and recovery. Jane Jacobs put it tersely as the “death and life” of cities. Nevertheless, civic identity endures despite vast changes of place. We continue to identify Rome, for example, as the “same” place over time – even though we recognize the enormous changes distinguishing the historical cities of Caesar, Petrarch, and Mussolini. No city is what is used to be. The same place does not remain the same. Yet, despite great changes, some places continue to make sense.

- This whole section really resonated with me, it sums up so well the sense of "home" I feel towards Sheffield as a city. It is completely the same, yet so different. Regardless I feel the same towards it as I did before leaving for university.

 

In popular writing about architecture and geography, “sense of place” has degenerate into a cliché, often suggesting little more than superficial impressions. Nevertheless, a place with integrity does make sense – it conveys meaning. The real “sense” of a place, therefore, is twofold. On the one hand, people feel it; on the other hand, they grasp its meaning. Today, the experience of place is often out of balance. Preoccupations with the logic of space tend to suppress the feeling of place. There is a tendency in modern Western thinking to separate the feelings, symbolic meanings, moral sentiments, and intuitions of a place from the intellectual, rational features. The expressive dimension gets lost in systems of design and management. Places, therefore, tend to lose an old kind of meaning: expressive intelligibility.

 

In ordinary life, some people still do grasp a place as a whole through a balanced experience of intellect, common sense, feeling, and imagination. Our technical languages, however, do not express the unity and coherence of this holistic experience, which gets factored away by geography, local history, architecture, city planning, sociology, environmental psychology, and so forth. Fragmenting the experience of place in the abstractions of the special disciplines reinforces the split between our methods of feeling and our methods of thinking. It also spoils the human environment, vitiating our ability to build and inhabit good houses, communities, and cities, because the conventional ways of thinking about housing and urban spaces do not grasp the reality of places as wholes.
- This paragraph sums up the relationship people have with cities extremely well, it recognises a conflict between logistics and more metaphorical or emotional feelings. Could this be a way to structure the publication? Sections that highlight the contrast between these elements? The discussion of history as well could be an interesting narrative to weave into the project. 

 

The integrity of a place suffers when what we learn by ear gets disconnected from what we perceive with the eye – still more when what we imagine seems irrelevant. The imagination makes sense. It is, moreover, an organ of perception – like our eyes, ears, and legs. We get to know a place when we participate in the local imagination. The whole synthesis of located experience – including what we imagine as well as the sights, stories, feelings, and concepts – gives us the sens of a place.

 

We are threatened today by two kinds of environmental degradation: one is pollution – a menace that we all acknowledge; the other is loss of meaning. For the first time in human history, people are systematically building meaningless places. However, we are a living through the end of an era, experiencing the demise of modern architecture, a revulsion from “futurism,” scepticism about planning, and a reaction against urban renewal programs. As we contemplate the ruins and dislocations of our cities, another way of understanding the built environment and the natural landscape is struggling to emerge. Today, everyone yearns for renewal, but from a holistic perspective, what does the renewal of a city mean? It is not merely physical reconstruction, as many people think – demolishing slums and replacing them with new buildings (like gentrification, happening in Kelham Island). Historically, the renewal of a city was experienced as a mental and emotional transformation, an improvement of the spirit, a rebirth of psychic energies.

 

(From this point on the topic of discussion is much more related to the content of the book and is more specific, less open). 

The purpose of this book is to provide theoretical resources for readers who want to rescue the obvious world from the degradation of feeling and meaning. A growing number of thoughtful and concerned people want to recover an environmental awareness that is not lost but driven underground. They are also looking for new ideas to change the world – but those new ideas, I believe, must include some old perspectives to grasp things whole and entire. We need to recover a way of thinking that ancient people took for granted. The renewal of consciousness implies a restitution of grounded intelligence. We need to experience the world in a radically old way.

When we are very young, the keepers of the obvious world encourage us to erect barriers segregating features of experience. We learn to build a mental life that separates thinking from feeling, and fact from fantasy. We settle reality, imagination, emotion, and reason in separate chambers of the psyche. When we follow fancy, we expect to step out of reality, and when we indulge our feelings, we exclude the intellect. Archaic people sought meaningful ways to fit the two together, “to combine empirical facts with imaginative fancies and to think in rhythm with their feeling and feel in rhythm with their thinking.” They wanted to build bridges in experience. They learned to represent their participation in cosmic processes – to identify the center of energy in themselves with the external energy of which nature is the image. It is possible to recover this integrity of experience and to relearn what ancient people took for granted. To modify a phrase from the work of a forgotten antiquary, we need a “restitution of decayed intelligence.”

In some ways, the diet of the mind resembles the diet of the body. Abstraction refines theory from the grain of experience, but the process may grind up our thoughts until they turn into such highly refined abstractions, so remote from the whole grain of experience, and rendered so thin, that they keep no energy to nourish the mind. William Blake identified this mental grind as the “dark Satanic mill” that transformed factory towns in the nineteenth century.

To reverse this way of thinking, let us return to holistic theory – to the archaic theoria that grasped the whole experience of a place. Originally, theoria meant seeing the sights, seeing for yourself, and getting a worldview, but it involved all the senses and feelings. Disintegrating this whole experience degrades the intangible, nonphysical, human energies of a place, and true renewal depends on some recovery of its integrity. Archaic theoria survives hidden in dimly remembered ways of thinking. Therefore, several chapters in this book explore the language and thinking of ancient Greeks. Alfred North Whitehead observed:

“Greece was the mother of Europe; and it is to Greece that we must look in order to find the origin of our modern ideas… The Greek genius was philosophical, lucid and logical… Their minds were infected with an eager generality. They demanded clear, both ideas, and strict reasoning from them… They were lucid thinkers and bold reasoners.”

The connection between Greek thinking and modern ideas is well known. This book explored the connection of Greek thinking to the archaic past. In philosophy and in drama, some Greek thinkers such as Plato and Sophocles wanted to unite the domain of lucid thought with the older and darker realm of obscure intimations. They wanted a union of sight with insight.

It has been said that the history of Western philosophy is a long series of footnotes to Plato and Aristotle. The statement is too extreme to take literally, but as a metaphor it suggest that those Greek philosophers clarified many issues that are still important to us. In the course of this inquiry, we shall return to Plato and Aristotle because a metaphysical difference between them on the concept of place expressed for the first time the presuppositions underlying crucial alternatives. We know how Greek language and concepts have shaped our science and technology. However, we are less familiar with the full range and harmony of Greek thought. In Plato’s doctrine of place we may recover an ancient balance of intellect and grounded experience. Nevertheless, Plato’s thinking moved in two directions. The Socratic side of Plato stayed close to the earth, but Plato’s invention of the “problem” was a turning point in the history of expressive intelligibility.

I argue that a place is not a problem but a riddle, and I explore the experiential difference between problems and riddles. Therefore, I do not investigate the modern crisis of places by offering solutions to their problems. Some readers may require more attention to our own era – more examples from the modern world – and in subsequent studies I hope to satisfy that demand. But for now let us explore historical changes in the structure of experience. This book is a theoretical rediscovery as well as a philosophical reinterpretation of the experience and meaning of place.

Our quest for archaic shapes of experience passes through “strange seas of thought,” exploring the lost work of periegetes, antiquaries, and choreographers, where sometimes it is possible to find holistic, integrated theoria. This voyage retronavigates the course of Blake’s enemy, Newton, who made the principal journey – now well charted in the modern mind – from magic to science. In Book 3 of his Prelude, William Wordsworth called the statue of Isaac Newton, beheld on bright nights from his college pillow,

The marble index of a mind forever
Voyaging through strange seas of Thought, alone.

I risk a voyage in the opposite direction, through stranger seas of thought, in the company of readers who are discontented with Newton’s way of experiencing the world. The frame of mind that makes holistic theoria possible is a form of inquiry I call “topistics,” or the study of placeways.

Today, conventional thinking associates the city with problems, and countless books are written about the crisis of urban society. Yet, as the volume of talk and writing about the subject expands, ideas about the city diminish, and we live with an abundance of discussion but a poverty of discourse. A great deals of thinking remains confined to mechanistic, economic, or other abstract models, which may be useful as far as they go, but they scarcely exhaust the many features of urban life, and they are remote from the human experience of cities. Even preservationists, sensitive to the historic meanings of the city, express the need for new theoretical resources. Civic authorities, city planners, and social scientists fail to view the city as a whole – as an order that carries meanings other than the maxims of zoning, amenity, and circulation. If the present trend continues, the city as a symbolic pattern – which is the way the ancients regarder it – may become unthinkable.

The following chapters explore the energies of places, modes of experiencing them, and the meaning of good and bad places. The main point of the entire argument is that our places will not improve until we change our form of topistic experience, and that it is humanly possible to change it. I describe some archaic kinds of grounded experience to suggest what may be recovered. We have not lost, in a mere century or two, a way of living in the world that belongs to the roots of humanity.

The first 5 paragraphs of text provide the words to describe a feeling I've always found difficult to put words to. It resonates with me a lot and I feel would do with others, this conflict between the logic and feeling.
- Feels like this text could drive the project, photographing the themes discussed, trying to encapsulate that feeling in photos.

The book isn't available in the library.
It seems appropriate to use the first few paragraphs of text for the project as they are the most relevant and provide an overview of the content of the book.

When discussing this essay with Felix it was interesting to see the similarities in how we felt the text related to Sheffield.
We discussed
- The moor, a place that's changed drastically an doesn't feel too much like the city anymore (architecturally), but the people that go there make it feel more like Sheffield.
- Kelham Island, this area of the city is changing frequently and has become a trendy spot to go visit. What we found interesting was how it attracted a young audience as well as a middle ages audience, why is this?
- Nether Edge, we both grew up here and there are a lot of memories attached to random things, like Skallywagz nursery and Zeds the wholefoods shop. I mentioned how I feel different about some of those places now and Felix said he did too. What is it about growing up that changed how we feel about a place? 

BARRY LEWIS:
The photography by Lewis has clear human focus, the way people and places are captured together creates a closeness between the audience and the content in the photograph (whether that be people, places or both).
Being British:




The photography of scenes captures something so iconic in such a way that makes you feel as though you're experiencing this too.
The older pictures have a soft haze to them, they feel cosy and familiar. I'm assuming this is because they were shot on film, but they also have a warm tone over them, there's something that presents a sense of nostalgia about these treatment of these image.

Film photos I currently have from Sheffield (or peak district):












Need to think about the places to photograph, what communicates a sense of "home". Develop a way of generating/structuring imagery. 

Reflecting:
  • The introduction from the essay sees to be a great way of developing a narrative to the publication, would allow for more interesting arrangements with text and image. It sums up a lot of what I feel towards Sheffield as a city, it allowed me to find the words. Can give direction in terms of photography.
  • Might be good to talk to peers about this sense of feeling, see if anyone feels the same, or talk to others about how they relate to Sheffield as "home" how that's changed over time? 

Tuesday, 30 March 2021

(B8) Social Media: Finalisation

 All spreads so far:


- A few of the pages need image alterations to avoid things becoming too pixelated.
- Alter the pages that were first done with random number generator as they didn't include left or right alignment (wiki spreads on galciokarst).
- Make all google maps images labe free, satellite imagery. 

Altered the imager to alight to the left or right, some changes to prevent the spread looking too loaded towards one side. 



CALL WITH PEG NOTES:
  • Very much at the final stage now, just needing to iron out a few things that are outstanding and need some consideration.
  • Cover design: Horizontal layout for cover, makes more sense to have the images fit this way around works as a wrap cover.
    - Need to rotate the images on the layout.
  • End pages being Mark Farid's talk, we still think this is relevant and would be a great way to enclose the project in something that sparked the whole conversation and themes.
    - Text condensed, subtle on the page.
    - Lighter weight paper?
  • Name? The name of the book should also be the name of the project as the book is a physical representation of the project. Should title the project and refer to the book as the same.
    - Does the name need to go on the cover? We don't think so, could see what we come up with and if it's appropriate. 
    - Need to mindmap out some ideas for the project/book name. 
  • Index/bibliography: Like the idea of having a bibliography of where all the content is from in the back of the book. A way of allowing the audience to find information on the content if they choose to do so. 
    - Peg suggested could be harvard referencing style in alphabetical order, this could work but I think it would be better to have page numbers and the content on the pages be under that section. Makes it easier to find where the images/content has come from if there's more order.

Referencing Research:

Already have a visually style so the referencing at the back should fit this. An experimental or slightly untraditional layout would help the collate all the information in one space.


Dante Carlos: The Fifth Wall
(https://dantecarlos.tumblr.com/)
There was no text explaining the purpose of the book, but felt as though it harnessed a sombre structured tone. The content is presented consistently throughout the book and what grabbed my attention the most was the indentations within the text that either contain extra content (reference name or number as an example). 

- Feel as though this could be a good way to visually demonstrate a difference/change of page without being too obvious.






Louisa Gagliardi:
Again I couldn't find any information about this book, not even a name. But visually the start of a new paragraph being shown by left edging out of the text block is a new and original way of demonstrating a change. It presents the text in a way that's much more condensed but with visual "breaks" within the text. 




Development:
The referencing should encompass the same visual theme as the rest of the pages but with the clear intention of being able to find out more information. 
- Keep in mind these small visual changes that can be made to achieve this, doesn't need to be overly complicated. 

A - Number indentations
Using indentations with page numbers to identify the new section. Feels digital with the sans typeface and arial bold for the page numbers.

B - Word and number indentations
Feeling more like a book with the 'pg' before the number, but prefer just the numbers, looks cleaner and more uniform. 

C - Number text breaks
These aren't very successful, your eye doesn't naturally fall on them as they're small, could do with more text, being larger or with more white space to demand attention (thinking back to CoP essay and what encourages someone to notice things on the page).

D - Word and number text breaks
More text on the subheading/titles helps bring the eye to those section, but the layout isn't successful, it feels odd to have the central aligned title with left aligned text so close. 

E - Word and line text breaks
Altering the alignment so they're the same, still needs more doing to it so they be read more easily at a glance.
- Feels as though the addition of more white space will help and smaller titles.

F - Number page indentations with random starts
The breaks at randomly generated starting points help as they provide more white space allowing the eye to naturally fall onto the elements (further assisted by being in bold). Could do with having more columns to get the text to sit in so more variation in placement and avoid any columns from getting too small. 

G - Same as E but will smaller type for page number
Smaller text will work better with more white space, feels too crowded at the moment. 

H - Text has staggered starts (randomly generated)
Really like this layout, the eye is drawn to the correct places and it works well. Only thing is it might get confusing with the difference between where the urls start and the page number.
I - Text and sub heading all with randomly generated staggered starts
Moving the page number text to match, looks too random here, it's difficult for your eye to know where to look. Could be due to the columns, maybe have 1 column for the text and see?

J - Titles in line with body text

K - Titles aligned to left

Between J and I.
Image I is more difficult to follow when text moves over from one page to the next it's difficult to follow where that is. Go with Image J, one column, achieves the same aesthetic as the whole publication but is practically easiest to read. 

Any alterations?


Attempting with IvyPresto Text in light italic but it feels too much when all the text is in this typeface, the sans serif font was more successful. 
Added in bullet points (one with dots other with asterisk) to make it more clear where the next URL began. Think the idea is good but this method of execution isn't the most effective, it adds visual distraction, taking up more cognitive processing, we want the referencing to be understandable. Could use indentation to indicate the start of a new URL?

Indenting the text outwardly works well in differentiating the start of a new line, tested it indenting inward and it was difficult to follow as the eye was looking for the start of a new line, easier to find when it is poking out (image above) rather than sitting inward (image below). 



Final Bibliography with correct URLs:





FINAL COVER:


The cover acts as an overview of our entire project in chronological order (days running along the short edge of the page)
- Evie has taken all imagery from within the book and placed them as tiny thumbnails in a calendar format from each day the image was downloaded- each line of images represents a different day, when we downloaded more imagery that day the thumbnails are smaller so they fit into the grid. 

This cover acts as a wrap around, with all the information travelling across the spine with no interruption. 
- Large amounts of negative space break up the cover, gives some breathing room and helps the audience decypher what images were downloaded on what day. The cover sums up the project by continuing to communicate a theme of tracking and monitoring but for the content of the project. Feels cyclical and summarises the project in a visual successfully.


PRODUCTION:
Book will be perfect bound due to the french fold pages, as there are a large number of pages having heavy paper stock will compromise the functionality of the book. Lighter weight paper would be the better option, ideally a more bright white paper to have the relevance to screen/digital media (also will allow for colours to be most vibrant) 

Digital print paper available:
  • Olin 90: Slightly off-white but good weight
  • Olin 120: Might be too heavy and is off-white
  • Cocoon Silk 135: True white but too heavy also has a plastic sheen to it (not desirable) 
  • Kodatrace: Good weight and colour, but only on rolls so can't double side
Spoke to Peg about printing and we decided to purchase our own white 100gsm paper to print on so we can get all the features we want. 
- Will run 1 print in digital print and then can make any alterations from there. 

603: Summative Module Evaluation

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